I normally don't find clumsiness attractive, so I wasn't really fond of Laine. If it was toned down a little then maybe it would have worked for me, but it was too much. The guy couldn't drive, cook, walk, talk on the phone...nothing.
Dev. Oh man, I LOVED Dev! Grammy was hilarious, too ;)
The climax I thought was going to be more, what's the word I am looking for?, ummm... of a battle? Yeah, I thought there was going to be a big long drag out fight. Instead I got Dev who basically tackled Victor and called it a day. Seriously?
Overall, it was good and I will continue to read the series.