I was getting a little tired of the 'ye' speak. I get it, you're Irish, but are 'ye' and 'aye' the only words you know?
The easy acceptance from Travis made me roll my eyes, but it wasn't too bad after he explained it.
I would have liked a little more conflict with Clyde and George. Also, could have used a little more of that possessiveness from Rainy.
I'll read the next one, since the alpha and Lark caught my interest.